Hello readers I have been doing some school work at home and I made a story called Cold Morning In The Park. It took me two days to finish. I had a photo of something to write about, here is the writing and the photo.
One day I woke up and looked out my window and saw a young man walking his cute little dog in the dog park. The man stopped and looked at the beautiful sky, I saw a bird nest in the tree next to him. I noticed he was actually looking at the cloud that looked like a human. If I was that young man I would feel freezing cold. The grass Looked like it was crunchy, sharp and white ish green. If I was that man I would smell dog poop on the grass. If I was the man I would hear my dog barking at the other dogs in the park and hear the grass crunching under my feet. Maybe I will see him tomorrow.
Welcome Ashleigh to distance learning.It is so good to see you and to read what you have been doing.I LOVE the photo.It almost looks like there is snow on the ground.
ReplyDeleteYou've used some great describing words.The cloud does look like a person.It looks like they are playing golf or dancing.
Keep up the great work,have a super weekend and I hope to see you on Monday,via the computer.
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DeleteHi Ashleigh. What a great piece of writing. The decriptive words you have used have made me feel like I am watching the same thing as you. That is what a good writer has the ability to do. You have also used your senses to describe the scene. Well done. Have a great weekend. :)
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